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(It's the fastest way to boost your sales conversions without spending a lot of time and money)

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Dear Online Business Owner,

Would you like to SKYROCKET your website sales without having to spend years becoming an expert copywriter or marketer?

Do you want more sales in your business?

Do you wish you could have more free time in your life, without having to worry about whether your sales page will keep customers coming in?

If so… sit back… relax… and read EVERY word of what I’m about to tell you. It’s truly that important.

Hi, it’s Garrett “The Conversion Freak” Strong here…

In the next few minutes I’m basically going to SPIT IN THE FACE of every professional direct response copywriter who offers website critiques, and reveal to you why most so called “expert copywriters” are ripping off the public BIG-TIME by offering critiques with little actual CASH producing value…

I want to show you the mistakes you’re making with your website that are preventing you from having the sales conversions you dream about, and that are keeping you from having more freedom in your business…

Is Your Sales Conversation A “Greased Shoot”?

It should be...

By having even one area in your marketing that disrupts the flow, it can cause your whole message to fail… ruining the effectiveness of your entire campaign, and all the hard work you put into it.

Being even the least bit unclear, boring, or even worse – not giving your readers a reason to care about you or your offer can KILL your attempts at selling…

With my website critique service I’ll do all the hard work for you by giving you a detailed critique of your website, sales page, series of webpages, email campaign and more... and provide you with changes that need to be made to boost your response…

You may not be an expert at writing copy that compels your readers to buy what you’re offering now, and that’s ok. Most business owners and marketers are not, but...

What a critique can do for your business can DRASTICALLY improve the amount of sales you get almost overnight…

I’ll run your web copy through my 88  point copy conversion checklist to make sure you have all the selling components you need to produce a flood of sales…

Just a bit of fair warning though. Due to my copywriting clients taking up most of my time, I'll be turning away new clients very soon, so get in now because you might not see this opportunity again…

Take full advantage of what I’m about to tell you…

I know how FRUSTRATING it can be to pour your time, effort, and money into writing a sales page, website, email follow ups, and more only to have it not produce for you. When I started out I wasted thousands of dollars trying to get my offer right, and create desire for my products and services…

In many cases you can waste a lot of time and money if you don’t include the many essential conversion elements on your page that will turn your readers into “rabid buyers”…

I’ll Put Your Copy Through My Rigorous 88 Point Conversion Checklist…

This will give you the insight you need to make changes to your copy so you qualify your prospects, and convert more visitors into buyers…

Of the many suggestions I'll give you for your website they might involve tweaking your message ever so slighty so that you're not being hypey (which can turn your prospects away in droves), or it could be a headline change I suggest for you which often can have a huge increase on your conversions…

Things like including hype in your marketing will no longer work in today’s marketing world, but it’s so common to see because it’s the easiest way to make yourself sound like what you're offering is going to amaze them…

People are jaded with this type of marketing message because they’ve been ripped off too many times by big promises that fail to deliver. People have come to resist this kind of sales message because they know they’re being sold to…

The whole concept behind good sales copy, whether it’s a sales letter, email, landing page, webinar or whatever is to never let on that you’re selling anything.

What works is keeping people sales radar at a level zero.

Think about it, how can you get someone to know, like, and trust you if all you ever do is try to get them to buy from you?

But this is the way most marketers today work. They try to force feed you their stuff without ever building a relationship with you, which is why their sales stink to high heaven…

So, if your sales copy isn’t working just know that it's not your fault and it can easily be fixed to bring in more sales…

See, there's a lot of bad advice out there when it comes to copywriting.

The internet is flooded with people claiming to be experts, yet they don’t have the proof to back up any of their claims…

As someone who’s written consistently for the “top dog” in affiliate marketing, Jason Akatiff, who’s online ad agency A4D.com has yearly sales totaling over $70 million dollars…

And someone who's worked as the in-house Conversion Rate Optimizer and direct response copywriter for Saleamp, Austin... I know how to increase sales and conversions.

In fact, when I rewrote Eddie Bauer Jr's entire site "SikkShades.com", he was so SHOCKED at the sales copy I delivered to him he wrote the following:

"Oh My! This copy is excellent... Man I am super impressed!"

Eddie Bauer Jr. Eddie Bauer Jr.
Sikk Shades

And after writing her sales page and two upsell pages for her skin care product line "SkinLycious", Jasmine Kang had this to say...

"Great sales copy! Garrett made very good suggestions that were constructive..."

Jasmine Kang Jasmine Kang
SkinLycious

I have the experience needed to make your website, product, or service a huge selling success!

I don’t just talk about creating marketing campaigns that sell big and give you the income and freedom you desire, I deliver on my promises too! If you want more proof you can checkout my portfolio after you finish reading this page.

With my website critique service you can rest assured you’re getting access to my many years of marketing, direct response copywriting, and online business building knowledge.

I’ll Give You A Profit-Boosting Website Critique So You Get Higher Conversions And Make More Cash!

When you purchase a website critique from me you have the option of having me critique your sales letter, up to 5 web pages, up to 10 emails, or any other page you wish to increase sales conversions on.

Then, I’ll provide feedback for changes that need to be made to boost your conversions...

Note that you have the option of having your critique delivered in a written pdf format, or I’ll do a video walk through (most people prefer this method) where I’ll go through your sales page and/or VSL in a video presentation. I’ll then send you the link to your website critique so you can watch the video and implement my suggestions. It’s your choice.

Here's How To Get Started

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    Complete Payment

    After you click on the add to cart button below and make the one time payment you’ll be instantly sent to the confirmation page where you’ll fill out the required information. I’ll contact you to confirm the delivery date after looking at my schedule. If at any time you don’t feel that I delivered on my promise, you can ask for a full refund. No questions asked!

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    Give Me 24 Hours To Respond

    I will typically contact you within 24 hours of receiving payment. At this point I’ll look at my schedule and reply with my completion date. Don’t worry, I work fast but I’m very diligent in my approach.

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    Profit

    I’m sure you can imagine now what your sales will be like after I deliver your critique and you apply the profit boosting changes. Remember, I’ve got years of experience writing sales copy for online businesses so you can rest-assured you’re in good hands, and I’ll reveal any problem areas on your sales page or VSL that are stealing sales from you…

Look, consider this the cheapest, and fastest way to increase your sales (without having to pay for my higher end copy writing services)…

Plus, you’ll make back your investment in no time at all. It’s really a no-brainer.

If I don't improve your conversions, then I want you to ask for a full refund. That's how I like to do business with people because that's how I like to be treated.

If you’re anything like the HUNDREDS of others who have already benefited from my website critique service, you’re interested in improving your sales without having to make a huge financial commitment…

And that’s why as my special gift to you today, I want to give you 2 astonishing bonuses...

Check Out These Bonuses...

Bonus #1: 30 Day Email Coaching ($295 Value)

This bonus is almost worth more than the entire sales letter critique alone since you’ll get one-on-one access to me and you’ll be able to ask me anything, and I mean anything related to your business and boosting your sales…

I’ll answer any questions you have about marketing… copy writing… structuring your website to convert sales… and much more (but I have to limit you to 10 emails to keep it reasonable)…

This is a massive value considering I normally charge $100 per hour when working with a client…

You will earn your money back within days with the marketing advice and coaching I’ll provide you in this email coaching course…


Bonus #2: Million Dollar Swipe File ($397 Value)

My million dollar swipe file has been responsible for countless successes and profits. It normally sells for $397 but it’s yours free when you purchase a website critique…

Inside this cash producing swipe file you’ll get “behind the curtain” access to the proven sales copy that I personally use to boost sales by up to 509%, and that I use for my high end clients who pay me $1,000’s…

Inside you’ll get full access to my:

  • 77 Attention Grabbing & Profit Producing Headlines…
  • 34 Powerful Intros Proven To Hook Your Prospects and Improve Sales…
  • 11 Proven Guarantees That Will Dramatically Improve Sales…
  • 5 Profit Boosting Sales Letter Formulas You Can Use To Write Top Converting Sales Pages…
  • And Much More

This swipe file has been responsible for producing millions of dollars for my clients, and it can do the same for you…

This Website Critique Will Work For You, Even If You’ve Tried Everything...

This website critique will work for you, and these bonuses will give you the keys to convert more of your prospects into raving customers and repeat buyers…

That’s why I want you to have both of these bonuses for FREE (That’s a $694 Value). If you’ve read this far then you probably know how valuable this website critique can be for your business…

And I know you can imagine what it’s going to feel like when you see more sales coming in as a result of applying the money making strategies I give you… Honestly, the way I was raised… if I don’t get you results then I don’t feel like I deserve your money.

There’s no doubt in my mind that you’ll get GREAT results with my sales letter critique service…

But, if you’re thinking that you’ll just do some quick research about how to write sales copy, and make some quick fixes to force you readers to drool at the mouth over your offer, you’re sorely mistaken…

It’s taken me years to get to this point…

This service is truly unique and it’s the only one like it in existence, so let’s talk about your alternatives… You could try to wing it and copy other successful websites, but that very rarely works.

There are psychological selling tricks and techniques that you don’t know that are hiding in plain view. Doing this is a TOTAL disaster. Let me ask you this: In a few months or years down the road are you still going to be struggling with producing enough leads and sales... still making the same old mistakes?…

How are you going to feel about yourself if you continue what you’re doing… without doing something to make your life better, or your family’s lives’ better. How would you feel if you could have done something that's simple and cheap that got you the sales you want?…

And, what if all you had to do was make a small investment in yourself? Something that wouldn’t even be a drop in the bucket for you…

How much would you pay to be able to make $1,000’s more in return, for years to come?…

But you don’t risk a penny today because

You're covered by my 60 day 100% money-back - No Risk Guarantee!

Order a website critique today…

Test out the changes I recommend, and if you're conversions don't improve then I want you to ask for a full refund. That's how confident I am about increasing your sales.

If you aren’t completely thrilled with the results… for any reason or for no reason at all… simply ask for a full refund. No questions asked. No hassle. No delay.

And… you can KEEP the 2 bonuses ($694 Value), as my gift just for giving this critique service a try.

Sure, this is a MEGA-generous deal, but I can’t keep it this cheap for much longer since my schedule is filling up fast… and if you snooze, you lose.

This Incredible One-Time-Offer Ends The Moment You Leave This Page

Now, I would love to keep this offer on the table for good, but this amazing deal is only available while you're on this page… and you won’t be able to get it for this dirt cheap price again…

The reason is I simply love to reward those people who take action fast…

Plus, like I said earlier. My copywriting clients are taking most of my time up so I'll probably have to stop this service soon.

So, if you decline today’s offer then you’ll pay full price in the future if I still make it available (I normally charge double the price for this), and I can’t guarantee I’ll be offering these bonuses again.

So, this is the last time you will get the chance to buy this unbelievable package at this price.

However, I will be raising the price of this package if I decide to continue it so I can cover my marketing costs, and all you have to do to get INSTANT access is click the Big “ADD to CART” button below.

Why waste your time or money any longer, when for a tiny price I’ll boost your sales for you…

The truth is I should really be offering this critique for over $1,000 due to the massive value it will provide you for years to come. And when you combine that with the bonuses it's a worth $1,694. This is a TOTAL steal, and you would pay for this investment many times over for that low, low price.

But it won't cost you $1,000, or $750, or even $500... Since I’m doing a market test today… you’re in luck. Today I’m practically giving away this service for just $295, and you’re covered by my rock solid – no questions asked 60 day money back guarantee.

And all you have to do to get started is click the Big “Add to Cart” button below, and simply fill out the payment form on the next page…

Yes, Please Upgrade My Order So I Don't Miss Out On This Profit Boosting Sales Letter Critique Service With Bonuses For A Crazy 40% Discount Today. Regularly $497. Today - Only $297.

If you choose to decline this special offer, please realize that you'll have to pay full price if you purchase a critique on any other day.  And I know you don't want to miss out on the incredible bonuses I've prepared for you.

No thanks. I'm converting sales just fine and I don't need to improve my conversions.

The following are just some of the ways you can apply the website critique. Remember, I’ll analyze your page and run it through my rigorous 88 point conversion checklist to ensure you have all the selling and copy writing components you need to maximize your sales.

Sales letters
Video sales letters
Webinars
Autoresponder Emails
Upsell Pages
Downsell Pages
And much more

If you don’t see your personal project listed above, don’t worry. I get all sorts of requests and I can help you get the sales you desire and deserve. Contact me if you have any questions.

Look, can you really afford to sit on the fence any longer and watch your sales suffer?

Purchase a website critique today and I guarantee that you'll be satisfied with the results.

Regards,

Garrett “The Conversion Freak” Strong

My Name Cursive

 

 

 

Direct Response Copywriter

P.S. Remember, this one time offer ends the moment you leave this page.