Would You Like Me To Personally Critique Your Website So You Convert More Sales And Leads?

portrait001_transparent_bkgFROM: Garrett “The Conversion Freak” Strong

LOCATION: My Home Office

Dear Business Owner or Online Marketer,

Would you like to SKYROCKET your website sales without having to spend years becoming an expert direct response copywriter or marketer?

Would you like more qualified leads?

Do you wish your business was more profitable so you can have more free time in your life, without having to worry about whether your sales will keep coming in?

If so… sit back… relax… and read EVERY word of what I’m about to tell you. It’s truly that important.

Hi, it’s Garrett “The Conversion Freak” Strong here…

In the next few minutes I’m basically going to SPIT IN THE FACE of every professional direct response copywriter who offers website critiques, and reveal to you why most so called “expert copywriters” are ripping off the public BIG-TIME by offering website critiques with little actual CASH producing value…

I want to show you the mistakes you’re making with your web business that are preventing you from making more sales, and giving you more freedom in your business…

Is Your Sales Conversation A “Greased Shoot”?

It should be...

By having even one area in your communications that disrupt the flow, it can cause your whole message to fail… ruining the effectiveness of your entire campaign, and all the hard work you put into it.

Being even the least bit unclear, being boring, or even worse – not giving your readers a reason to care about you or your offer can KILL your attempts at selling…

With my website critique service I’ll do all the hard work for you by giving you a detailed critique of your website, sales page, series of webpages, email campaign, and much more…

You may not be an expert at writing copy that compels your readers to optin, call now, or buy what you’re offering, and that’s ok. Most business owners and marketers are not, but...

What a website critique can do for your business can DRASTICALLY improve the amount of leads and sales you get almost overnight…

I’ll run your sales page, series of web pages, email campaigns, or whatever you choose to have critiqued through my 88  point copy conversion checklist to make sure you have all the selling components you need to produce a flood of sales…

Just a bit of fair warning though. I only have a few spots left because my copywriting clients are taking most of my time up, so this may be your only chance to get in on this opportunity for a while…

So, take full advantage of what I’m about to tell you…

I know how FRUSTRATING it can be to pour your time, effort, and money into writing a sales campaign only to have it not produce for you. When I started I wasted thousands of dollars trying to get my offer right, and create desire for my products and services…

In many cases you can waste a lot of time and money writing a sales page or email campaign if you don’t include the many essential conversion elements on your page that will turn your readers into “rabid buyers”…

I’ll Put Your Copy Through My Rigorous 88 Point Conversion Checklist…

This will give you the insight you need to make changes to your copy so you qualify your prospects, and convert more visitors into buyers…

Of the many suggestions I'll give you for your website they might involve tweaking your message ever so slighty so that your not being hypey (which can turn your prospects away in droves), or it could be a headline change I suggest for you which often can have a huge increase on your conversions…

Things like including hype in your marketing will no longer work in today’s marketing world, but it’s so common to see because it’s the easiest way to make yourself sound like what your offering is going to amaze them…

People are jaded with this type of marketing message because they’ve been ripped off too many times by big promises that fail to deliver. People have come to resist this kind of sales message because they know they’re being sold to…

The whole concept behind good sales copy, whether it’s a sales letter, email, landing page, webinar or whatever is to never let on that you’re selling anything.

What works is keeping people sales radar at a level zero.

Think about it, how can you get someone to know, like, and trust you if all you ever do is try to get them to buy from you?

But this is the way most marketers today work. They try to force feed you their stuff without ever building a relationship with you, which is why their sales stink to high heaven…

So, if your sales copy isn’t working just know that it's not your fault and it can easily be fixed to bring in more sales…

See, there's a lot of bad advice out there when it comes to copywriting.

The internet is flooded with people claiming to be experts, yet they don’t have the proof to back up any of their claims…

As someone who’s written consistently for the “top dog” in affiliate marketing, Jason Akatiff, who’s online ad agency A4D.com has yearly sales totaling over $70 million dollars…

And someone who's worked as the in-house Conversion Rate Optimizer and direct response copywriter for Saleamp, Austin... I know how to increase sales and conversions.

In fact, when I rewrote Eddie Bauer Jr's entire site "SikkShades.com", he was so SHOCKED at the sales copy I delivered to him he wrote the following:

"Oh My! This copy is excellent... Man I am super impressed!"

Eddie Bauer Jr. Eddie Bauer Jr.
Sikk Shades

And after writing her sales page and two upsell pages for her skin care product line "SkinLycious", Jasmine Kang had this to say...

"Great sales copy! Garrett made very good suggestions that were constructive..."

Jasmine Kang Jasmine Kang
SkinLycious

I have the experience needed to make your website, product, or service a huge selling success!

I don’t just talk about creating marketing campaigns that sell big and give you the income and freedom you desire, I deliver on my promises too! If you want more proof you can checkout my portfolio after you finish reading this page.

With my website critique service you can rest assured you’re getting access to my many years of marketing, direct response copywriting, and online business building knowledge.

I’ll Critique Your Sales Letter, Landing Pages, Optin Pages, Email Autoresponders and Much More…

When you purchase a website critique from me you have the option of having me look at your sales page or sales video (by far the most popular option), up to 5 landing/optin pages, series of web pages (limit 5), or even use it to have your email follow up sequence analyzed…

Then, I’ll provide feedback for changes that need to be made to improve your conversions...

Note that you have the option of having your critique delivered in a written pdf format, or I’ll do a video walk through (most people prefer this method) where I’ll go through your sales page and/or other material in a presentation. I’ll then send you the link to your website critique so you can watch the video and implement my suggestions. It’s your choice.

Here's How To Get Started

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    Complete Payment

    After you click on the add to cart button below and make the one time payment you’ll be instantly sent to the confirmation page where you’ll fill out the required information. I’ll contact you to confirm the delivery date after looking at my schedule. If at any time you don’t feel that I delivered on my promise, you can ask for a full refund. No questions asked!

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    Give Me 24 Hours To Respond

    I will typically contact clients within 24 hours of receiving payment. At this point I’ll look at my schedule and reply with my completion date. Don’t worry, I work fast but I’m very diligent in my approach.

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    Profit

    I’m sure you can imagine now what your sales will be like after I deliver your critique and you apply the profit boosting changes. Remember, I’ve got years of experience writing sales copy for online businesses so you can rest-assured you’re in good hands, and I’ll reveal any problem areas on your sales page or series of web pages that are stealing sales from you…

Look, consider this the cheapest, and fastest way to increase sales on your website (without having to pay for my higher end copy writing services)…

Plus, you’ll make back your investment in no time at all. It’s really a no-brainer.

If I don't improve your conversions, then I want you to ask for a full refund. That's how I like to do business with people because that's how I like to be treated.

If you’re anything like the HUNDREDS of others who have already benefited from my website critique service, you’re interested in improving your sales without having to make a huge financial commitment…

And that’s why as my special gift to you today, I want to give you 2 astonishing bonuses...

Check Out These Bonuses...

Bonus #1: 30 Day Email Coaching ($295 Value)

This bonus is almost worth more than the entire website critique alone since you’ll get one-on-one access to me and you’ll be able to ask me anything, and I mean anything related to your business and boosting your sales…

I’ll answer any questions you have about marketing… copy writing… structuring your website to convert sales… and much more (but I have to limit you to 10 emails to keep it reasonable)…

This is a massive value considering I normally charge $100 per hour when working with a client…

You will earn your money back within days with the marketing advice and coaching I’ll provide you in this email coaching course…


Bonus #2: Million Dollar Swipe File ($397 Value)

My million dollar swipe file has been responsible for countless successes and profits. It normally sells for $397 but it’s yours free when you purchase a website critique…

Inside this cash producing swipe file you’ll get “behind the curtain” access to the proven sales copy that I personally use to boost sales by up to 509%, and that I use for my high end clients who pay me $1,000’s…

Inside you’ll get full access to my:

  • 77 Attention Grabbing & Profit Producing Headlines…
  • 34 Powerful Intros Proven To Hook Your Prospects and Improve Sales…
  • 11 Proven Guarantees That Will Dramatically Improve Sales…
  • 5 Profit Boosting Sales Letter Formulas You Can Use To Write Top Converting Sales Pages…
  • And Much More

This swipe file has been responsible for incredible profits for my clients, and it can do the same for you…

This Website Critique Will Work For You, Even If You’ve Tried Everything To Increase Sales On Your Website…

This website critique will work for you, and these bonuses will give you the keys to convert more of your prospects into raving customers and repeat buyers…

That’s why I want you to have both of these bonuses for FREE (That’s a $694 Value). If you’ve read this far then you probably know how valuable this website critique can be for your business…

And I know you can imagine what it’s going to feel like when you see more sales coming in as a result of applying the money making strategies I give you… Honestly, the way I was raised… if I don’t get you results then I don’t feel like I deserve your money.

There’s no doubt in my mind that you’ll get GREAT results with my website critique service…

But, if you’re thinking that you’ll just do some quick research about how to write sells copy, and make some quick fixes to force you readers to drool at the mouth over your offer, you’re sorely mistaken…

It’s taken me years to get to this point…

This service is truly unique and it’s the only one like it in existence, so let’s talk about your alternatives… You could try to wing it and copy other successful websites, but that very rarely works.

There are psychological selling tricks and techniques that you don’t know that are hiding in plain view. Doing this is a TOTAL disaster. Let me ask you this: In a few months or years down the road are you still going to be struggling with producing enough leads and sales... still making the same old mistakes?…

How are you going to feel about yourself if you continue what you’re doing… without doing something to make your life better, or your family’s lives’ better. How would you feel if you could have done something that simple and cheap that got you the sales you want?…

And, what if all you had to do was make a small investment in yourself? Something that wouldn’t even be a drop in the bucket for you…

How much would you pay to be able to make $1,000’s more in return, for years to come?…

But you don’t risk a penny today because

You're covered by my 60 day 100% money-back - No Risk Guarantee!

Order a website critique today…

Test out the changes I recommend, and if you're conversions don't improve then I want you to ask for a full refund. That's how confident I am about increasing your sales.

If you aren’t completely thrilled with the results… for any reason or for no reason at all… simply ask for a full refund. No questions asked. No hassle. No delay.

And… you can KEEP the 2 bonuses ($694 Value), as my gift just for giving this critique service a try.

Sure, this is a MEGA-generous deal, but I can’t keep it this cheap for much longer due to my costs of marketing… and if you snooze, you lose.

And since I’m doing a market test on the price right now… you can take full advantage of me while I’m doing it.

However, I will be raising the price soon to cover my marketing costs, and all you have to do to get INSTANT access is click the Big “ADD to CART” button below.

Why waste your time or money any longer, when for a tiny price I’ll boost your sales for you…

The truth is I should really be offering this critique for over $1,000 due to the massive value it will provide you for years to come. And when you combine that with the bonuses it's a worth $1,694.

This is a TOTAL steal, and you would pay for this investment many times over for that low, low price.

But it won't cost you $1,000, or $800, or even $500...

Since I’m doing a market test today… you’re in luck.

Today I’m practically giving away this service for just $495, and you’re covered by my rock solid – no questions asked 60 day money back guarantee.

And all you have to do to get started is click the Big “Add to Cart” button below, and simply fill out the payment form on the next page…

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What Can You Use This Website Critique For?

The following are just some of the ways you can apply the website critique. Remember, I’ll analyze your page and run it through my rigorous 88 point conversion checklist to ensure you have all the selling and copy writing components you need to maximize your sales.

Sales letters
Video sales letters
Webinars
Autoresponder Emails
Upsell Pages
Downsell Pages
And much more

If you don’t see your personal project listed above, don’t worry. I get all sorts of requests and I can help you get the sales you desire and deserve. Contact me if you have any questions.

Regards,

Garrett “The Conversion Freak” Strong

My Name Cursive

 

 

Direct Response Copywriter

P.S. Remember, as my schedule fills up I won’t be offering this website critique service at this price for much longer.